Clean page with a distinctive style. It feels polished and well organized overall. 👍 The French hero headline feels weaker than the English one. “Une question avant le reflexe.” doesn’t communicate the idea as immediately as “A question before the habit takes over.” I also think the hero title could be more about what the user needs are and not just a description of the product, The value proposition of the product still feels slightly abstracts to me. “When you open an app, pourquoi.app asks why” explains the mechanism, but not quite the outcome. I understand what happens, but I have to infer why I want it. Something like “Break mindless scrolling" ? Perhaps removing the 3 badges. and replacing it with it ? (The 3 badges add unecessary information in my opinion at this stage where user are just discovering the product) First of all only show the Made in France badge and flag to French viewers, it’s unlikely to add much value for international users. The "no blocking" badge is very abstract, and even more in French. The hero could also demonstrate the product instead of just showing it. A short looping animated demo (WebP atlas or similar) could work really well. either a dynamic one or looping animation. The navigation top bar dowload buttons with the appstore and google play link adds visual information that compete with the other hero CTA. (The reason it competes visually is the added visual details, color , the playstore icon white background on the green buttons...) I think there is also Too much space under the hero text section, perhaps inviting in a small piece of the next section in order to invite users to scroll in? Perhaps centering vertically the hero text section could help. To finish with this : I think the main issue is that the value proposition is not obvious enough for users in theirs first 3 seconds of them visiting the page.
What a roast... Full of value thank you! A lot of good ideas that I'll surely apply.. THANK YOU!
